Writing the script was extremely important to my creative thought process, as it allowed me to further visualise the entire narrative of the short film. Throughout the course of writing, I came across many plot points that could be improved upon. For example, I wanted to have some sort of voiceover in the style of an inner monologue, however I realised it would make a lot more sense to replace it with a scene in which a different character leaves the other one a voice message over the phone.
In addition to this, I decided that one scene would look a lot better if it was filmed in an entirely different location.
Above I have inserted an unrefined version of my script. Not all dialogue is presented, however there will not be a large amount of dialogue in the short film anyway. I want the narrative to be predominantly told through visuals, as I believe that presents me with more of a challenge.